Ultimate shoulder rides

It is OK - I found it again.

"Amir the rider".

An excellent story with a very appropriate and exciting conclusion!

Thank you.

Max wrote:

I didn't delete anything!
My last story was "The Mares' Race," which I actually didn't finish. It was objected that the male and female jockeys were too young to play a role in this story. This is certainly a valid point; I accepted the objection and subsequently changed the riders' ages.

In my opinion, however, it's part of the story (riding mares!) that the jockeys aren't grown men and women, but talented young riders.

I've stopped continuing the story. Anyone who wants to and is interested in such content is welcome to continue the topic and text...
Max

Understood.
For some reason I struggled to find the story after starting to read it yesterday.
All found now - and very enjoyable it was, too!

I will take look at the Mares story and see if I can add to it, but being a committed male slave putting myself in the position of a mare is a little more difficult.

Hi, Max. Thank you very much for your stories. I've read many of them and I like them. I like that you use a saddle while shoulder rides. I also like that you try to explain some philosophy and psychology of the shoulder riding actions. You have a lot of ideas and vary them in different combinations - that is cool!
On the other hand, I see that the most of the stories on this site are focused on torture and suffering of ponies, so there are a lot of heavy weight riders who ride a small and weak pony until he collapses.
Max, do you have or do you know stories where slim and pretty women get their pleasure not from humiliating and injuring their ponies, but from reliable and comfortable riding on their strong and enduring two-legged stallions?

Max wrote:

I'm glad you like some of the stories I've written. There probably won't be anyone who likes them all (except me, of course!!!).

I've actually never written a story in which a slim, pretty woman rides a two-legged horse, treating it kindly and lovingly. Just like many young women do with their four-legged horses. I think this can be explained.

In my erotic fantasies, I am a horse, perhaps more of a riding slave, ridden by a woman. She sits on my shoulders or back, has a riding whip, boots with spurs, and drives me on like an unwilling horse. But there may also be other "horse things" that I have to do under her rule.

So these are more like maso-fantasies that have accompanied me almost my entire life. It simply doesn't fit with my erotic expectations to carry a friendly, considerate rider who treats me the way animal-loving young ladies (and men, of course!) should always treat their four-legged friends.

Conclusion: I'll probably never write a story like the one you're imagining, and probably won't be able to.
Max

I am exactly with you on this, Max!

When you write a story, you have complete freedom and can let your imagination run wild. It's not crucial to get "the facts" exactly right. To echo your comment, you can write the way you think a woman feels (for example, while riding a man like a horse). You can even make her feel and think the way you want her to feel and think.

You're putting yourself in shackles with your limitations, refraining from writing a story the way you like it just because you think you don't have the prerequisites ("I'm not a woman!"). This isn't about demanding literary work...

My (unsolicited, sorry) advice is therefore: just give it a try, just get started!
Max

Max wrote:

When you write a story, you have complete freedom and can let your imagination run wild. It's not crucial to get "the facts" exactly right. To echo your comment, you can write the way you think a woman feels (for example, while riding a man like a horse). You can even make her feel and think the way you want her to feel and think.

You're putting yourself in shackles with your limitations, refraining from writing a story the way you like it just because you think you don't have the prerequisites ("I'm not a woman!"). This isn't about demanding literary work...

My (unsolicited, sorry) advice is therefore: just give it a try, just get started!
Max

Yes, Max, maybe you're right

There are a LOT of romantic shoulder riding stories on this forum, its actually too much in my opinion, you can read Caballito's stores, most them are without any such torture as you put it, I think Max's stores are near perfect, he does't need to change at all, all we need is for him to produce more storeis!

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PonyM wrote:

Max wrote:

When you write a story, you have complete freedom and can let your imagination run wild. It's not crucial to get "the facts" exactly right. To echo your comment, you can write the way you think a woman feels (for example, while riding a man like a horse). You can even make her feel and think the way you want her to feel and think.

You're putting yourself in shackles with your limitations, refraining from writing a story the way you like it just because you think you don't have the prerequisites ("I'm not a woman!"). This isn't about demanding literary work...

My (unsolicited, sorry) advice is therefore: just give it a try, just get started!
Max

You are right on target again, Max.

Not nany females write here because not many females frequent this site (sadly) as not enough females seem to be stimulated to ride humans.

It is definitely unfair for you to receive criticism, given your excelkent and very extensive story writing as it stands.

Hi, PonyM.
My criticism wasn’t to Max’s stories, on the contrary they are very good for me, I like his emphasize on strong two-legged horses. That is why I asked his opinion.
My criticism was to the whole situation in this site and the rest internet. There are a lot of torture stories but very few stories about erotic advantages of shoulder riding itself. Why? What do you think? May be because women aren’t interested in it? Why they are not interested? What do they want? I don’t understand why only males get interest in this fantasies.