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#1 2022-04-29 18:44:09

Max
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Hallo, I am Max

I am new in this forum, want to post one or another comment and some stories. For translation from german into english I need a machine ... hope it is readable in any case

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#2 2022-04-30 11:49:05

caballito
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Hi Max!

Google Translator is a good tool, but you should always check before posting because there are inconsistencies when you write "regional expressions".

I suggest you make short posts so they are understandable, and those who do not speak English can use the translation tool.

Welcome!

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#3 2022-04-30 13:24:13

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I did it with Deepl! What is your fealing about the level of reading?
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#4 2022-05-01 06:06:32

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The translation is good, you are sharing your stories but you should consider the rider/horse relationship is a relationship of 2 equals because they are a team, they are allies and both take care of each other. Actually the rider, especially the owner, does not mistreat the horse.
I suggest you evaluate, you have the option to edit.
Hugs.

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#5 2022-05-01 11:45:34

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There are of course many ways to write about "shoulder riding"! In my stories, the two-legged horse is usually a riding slave with whom the female rider ( sometimes a rider! ) does not deal very kindly. Whip and spurs drive the slave horse!

My suggestion: I'll finish writing this first story, maybe a second one, then watch the - I hope - feedback. If the readers don't like my style, I would also stop writing, because the stories should be read with pleasure, otherwise I wouldn't have any fun with them.

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#6 2022-05-02 04:09:53

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I like your generosity in sharing your stories, in them the Lady Rider is strict with her human horse.
Human horses are similar to equine horses, a horse (human or equine) when he was well trained does not need his rider to drive him with reins, spurs and whip as he just goes along the path without the guidance of his Rider.
A Lady Rider has several human horses at her disposal, she can take several of her horses for a ride, she rides one of her horses while the others of her horses follow her waiting their turn to be ridden by her, she rides them several times one by one in a row. Lady Rider doesn't need to mistreat her animal.

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#7 2022-05-02 09:53:40

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That's one way of looking at it, of course!

So I'm just finishing this one story! I clearly notice that we have different concepts in our stories. Of course, everyone is happy when they find someone who has the same fantasies, but that doesn't always happen. If it doesn't fit, you can't change it!

There are obviously no other voices on the subject, which surprises me a bit, because some people have already read my text!
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#8 2022-05-02 11:30:03

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I love your story, and especially the fact the the horse is a slave and the rider a Mistress or a Master ... Please keep writing this first story, and then another, and another, and another .... smile I'm sure I'll love them all !!!!

MFG

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#9 2022-05-02 18:12:42

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Thanks for your reply Esel, I was pleased, especially as it was positive! We'll see what Caballito says about it, it's probably not his way of writing!

I'm new here, but I think he's the biggest activist, maybe it's even his forum!

It's perfectly clear that I would never write about children, animals or similar stuff like that! In my stories, however, "bad" people do deal with others, as one should not do in real life! I don't want Caballito to "pull me at my ear" if in a story  ladies and gentlemen riders treat their two-legged horses very badly! I would not like things like that!

Tomorrow or the day after tomorrow we will know what's about!

Thanks again!
Max

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#10 2022-05-10 02:00:31

caballito
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Riding another person, on shoulders or on back, has levels.
- The basic level is the simple game, we could call it "play level" when children and people of legal age are playing it, because we have a human carrying another human.
- The next levels are the "role play level" or "ponyplay level", practiced only by people of legal age, where the game is more elaborate, this level involves human horses.
As a curious fact that many people may not have realized, many times the dominant is the human horse and the submissive is the Rider.

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