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#1 2024-11-29 23:38:13

p7691519
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The mountain training

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The sun blazed from the sky, an unforgiving ball of fire that baked the earth to a crust. In the parched desert landscape, two figures moved with a rhythm that seemed almost alien: one sitting tall and proud, the other bent under a heavy burden. The taller figure was a man, muscular and tanned, his eyes fixed on the distant horizon. The smaller figure beneath him was a creature of a different ilk, his broad shoulders bowed under a leather saddle.

With each step the smaller creature took, the sands whispered a tale of pain and endurance. His muscles bulged, and sweat trickled down his face, stinging his eyes and blurring his vision. Each breath was a battle, his chest heaving with the effort of supporting the weight above. The man's calloused hand clutched a whip, the leather coiled and ready to strike again, the crack of it echoing through the still air like the snap of a bone.

The mountain loomed ahead, a jagged silhouette against the cloudless sky. Its sides were steep, a daunting climb for even the fittest of men. Yet, the man atop the saddle urged his steed forward, his grip tightening, his voice a harsh command that cut through the heat. The creature beneath him stumbled, the rocks sharp under his bare feet, but the whip bit into his flesh, and he found the strength to keep moving.

The journey was punctuated by the rhythmic thud of the man's boots against the makeshift saddle, the clink of spurs against skin, and the creature's gasping breaths. The mountain grew closer, its peak a taunting challenge that seemed to drift away with each agonizing step. The creature's eyes darted to the horizon, where a mirage shimmered, a tantalizing promise of water and rest that remained stubbornly out of reach.

Finally, the slope grew steeper, the rocks larger and more treacherous. The creature's legs trembled, his breaths coming in ragged gasps. The man's hand hovered, ready to deliver another lash, but then something gave way. With a cry of despair, the creature's legs buckled, sending both figures tumbling into the dust. The man landed heavily, the wind knocked from his lungs, but it was the creature who bore the brunt of the fall. He lay there, face pressed into the unforgiving ground, body quivering with the effort to stay conscious.

For a moment, there was silence, save for the harsh panting of the creature and the distant hum of the desert. Then the man's voice, a mix of anger and satisfaction, broke through the quiet. "Get up," he barked. "We're not done yet."

The creature, feeling the weight of the world upon him, somehow managed to push himself up onto his hands and knees. His entire body screamed in protest, but the fear of the whip was a more powerful motivator. With a grunt, he staggered to his feet, the saddle digging into his shoulders once more. The man dusted himself off, his expression one of cold resolve.

The whip cracked again, sending a fresh wave of pain through the creature's already tortured body. He took a stumbling step up the slope, his eyes on the ground, focusing on nothing but the next step. Each stone was a miniature mountain to climb, each pebble a treacherous pitfall. The man's boots dug into his back, urging him forward with a brutal rhythm that matched the beat of his own pulse.

The sun was now directly overhead, casting no shadows to offer relief from the relentless heat. The creature felt his strength waning, his legs threatening to give out once more. But the whip kept coming, the spurs digging deeper. He could taste the coppery tang of his own blood in his mouth, feel the sticky warmth of it as it trailed down his back. Yet, he pushed on, driven by a force that was as much fear as it was a desperate hope for survival.

As the summit grew nearer, the man's breathing grew heavier too. The effort of climbing such a steep incline, even on a beast of burden, was not to be underestimated. But he knew the value of this exercise, the importance of breaking the spirit of his property. He would not relent until they had reached the top.

The creature's vision swam with exhaustion, his thoughts a jumble of pain and despair. The only thing keeping him moving was the promise of a brief reprieve, the sweet illusion of rest that lay just beyond the peak. He could almost feel the coolness of the shade, the gentle caress of a breeze on his sweat-soaked skin.

With a final, monumental effort, the creature hauled himself up the last few feet, collapsing onto the rocky plateau. The man leaped from his back, landing lightly on his feet. He looked down at the creature, panting and bleeding, and felt a twisted sense of pride. The creature had proven himself, but it was a victory that would be short-lived.

The man allowed a few minutes to pass, watching as the creature lay there, his body heaving with the effort of breathing. Then, without a word of mercy, he grabbed the creature by the scruff of the neck and yanked him upright. "We're going back down," he said, his voice devoid of emotion. "And tomorrow, we'll do it again."

The creature's eyes met his for a brief, desperate second. In those dark pools of pain, the man saw something flicker, something that could have been defiance or resignation. But there was no time to ponder such things. The whip cracked once more, and the descent began, a grueling mirror of their ascent, each step a punishment, each breath a battle cry of endurance.

The man mounted the saddle once again, feeling the warmth of the creature's sweat and the stickiness of his blood seep through his pants. He knew the journey back would be just as brutal, just as long. But he was determined to break him, to shape him into the perfect weapon for the battles that lay ahead. The creature would learn his place, or he would perish under the relentless desert sun.

The two figures made their way down the mountain, their shadows stretching long across the sand. The creature's legs trembled with each step, his eyes on the unforgiving path ahead. The man's gaze, however, was on the horizon, his mind racing with thoughts of the power they would soon wield together. The training was far from over. It had only just begun.

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#2 2024-11-30 12:13:34

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Re: The mountain training

VERY GOOD NARRATIVE INDEED  !!! The description of the creature's suffering will certainly appeal to any carrier in this forum who ever had to climb a slope with a rider on his shoulders !! Even a short slope, not too stiff, and under a not toot heavy rider, is a nightmare come true for the poor human horse !
Now how could the creature achieve such a great performance ? Is it will power ? Fear of suffering ? Self transcending through subservience ? Or the inflexible determination of the Master ?
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#3 2024-12-05 21:25:36

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Re: The mountain training

Your story started really well! I enjoyed reading the text. It would be nice if you wanted to "go one step further".
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#4 2024-12-13 15:45:26

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Re: The mountain training

@ Max, how is this even comparable to your stories, Max? Yours are written by a real person with real feelings and life experience, they're extremely proactive, sensual, and push the limits. This one, instead, is written by a robot!

Please, we want your stories. Please, please write more!

Let me know if you'd like any further adjustments!

Max wrote:

Your story started really well! I enjoyed reading the text. It would be nice if you wanted to "go one step further".
Max


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#5 2024-12-14 11:38:43

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Re: The mountain training

The writer is the human who uses the keyboard or voice to enter information into the system, while the AI ​​is a support to the human who gives ideas to enrich the narrative.

The scenario shown is another planet where 2 species from different worlds collided and the human prevailed against the other being.

I would have loved: a lady to be the character of the rider in the narration, because she is a natural rider, so the alien human horse would have shown the same devotion and dedication offered by a human man to a woman. A real man gives himself to a woman just like a dog or a horse does.

They encouraged p7691519 to continue writing his story, Success!

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#6 2024-12-23 10:46:26

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Re: The mountain training

really wonderful stroy.
I am a rider. I imagined myself riding that creature.
felt awesome


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#7 2024-12-27 20:03:18

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Re: The mountain training

Part 2

The poor creature was draped by sweat under the the un supportable weight of his rider who sat completely relaxed on his human horse and smoking his cigarettes.
"Go ahead you lazy horse!" the rider commanded his horse harshly by underlining his orders with the heels of his boots and his brutal whip.
During the ride the rider also drank from his whisky bottle.

The suddenly he ordered his human horse to go down.
"I need to have a leak" he shouted roughly while the human horse knelt on the ground.
Then the brutal rider smiled: "Oh, I see you are thirsty........I can help you in my generosity"
And so that you see that I am not a human abuser.
And he laughed: Stay down and open your mouth!"
The human beast followed the order and heard:"Open your mouth" and instantly he had the huge male organ of his master in his mouth.
And on the spot he tasted the warm piss of his master who commented: Oh that's 'doing so good to me....swallow useless slave!"
"Oh you are really good" he heard his owner and master say.

A strong jet of his master's piss shot into his mouth and he felt his master's huge male organ filling almost his entire mouth and he heard the satisfied grunts of his master enjoying his relaxation.
The poor guy had to swallow hard until the stream finally dried up.
But unlike expected, his master's male organ remained deep in his mouth and down his throat.
“Go on, work my male organ!” was the brutal command.
And the slave obediently worked his master's male organ, which only got bigger as a result of the intensive tongue massage.
“Yes, that's it...you're a real talent...you're worth your price ..... My ladies at home will be delighted that I'm bringing them such a wonderful natural talent.”
And he moaned loudly again and again until his male organ finally exploded and he unloaded his sperm into his mouth in powerful spurts.
“This is extremely valuable power food that I'm giving you and you have to thank me properly by humbly kissing and worshipping my male organ and balls.
While he was still humbly thanking his master and owner with his tongue on his male organ and humbly kissing his master's male organ and balls, he heard his master murmur: “A really good buy....da will make my spoiled ladies very happy when they get such a natural. You're not only good to ride, but also a jewel for the sexual needs of your mistresses.....My wife and my young daughters will be thrilled!”

The poor guy had swallowed huge amounts of his rider's piss and was even grateful for it. Because while his rider had spent the whole day sitting relaxed on him, drinking and smoking, he was losing huge amounts of sweat. As salty and spicy as the piss on his lapel tasted, it was liquid. And the huge amount of cream from his rider's male organ did him even more good. After all, it was first-class protein that gave him new strength, even if his mouth was still full of mucus for a long time.
At least it gave him new strength while his master and owner relaxed and sat comfortably smoking on his neck.

Hearing that that there were 2 adult ladies and 4 teens at his home the young guy was in real fear.
His master was a cruel beast but he had made already cruel experiences with all kind of ladies and even young teens.
Each step he was coming closer to the property of his new owner and master he got more and more alarmed.

Jack, that was the name of the tall rake, took his seat on the saddle, satisfied and in a good mood.
“It just feels good to be able to relax and unwind in every way”
The small saddle pressed brutally into the slave's neck under the weight of his rider.
“Come on forward, you lazy piece” was the harsh command as the young slave struggled under the weight of his master.
Sitting comfortably and softly, his master enjoyed every step and smoked his cigarettes with relish until at some point he pressed his cell phone.
He was obviously calling his wife.
“Hello darling, I'll be home soon.at home... I think I'll need another hour or so”
A very friendly woman with a very pleasant and pleasant voice answered on the other end.
Hope sprouted in the slave.

Jack, the proud owner and master of the new slave, had made himself comfortable in the saddle and mocked: “You are well-bred and know what we better people expect from a slave. You may now rock my divine balls and my divine ass. A wonderful task for a real slave”
He laughed and brutally rubbed his ass in the saddle and gave him a whole series of blows with his bullwhip to cheer him up.
“Don't be lazy...the ladies are already waiting for us impatiently.” He laughed maliciously.

Jack was completely satisfied. He had made an excellent deal with the young ladies.
The slave was a real bargain and really cheap.
They were three very young students who were extremely popular and well-known as very attractive cheerleaders.
With their idea of helping young homeless people, they lured young drifters to their so-called help center and then sold them to the highest bidder, mostly to ladies, without any scruples, just like in the old days of slavery.

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#8 2024-12-28 14:30:26

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Re: The mountain training

We can see that the first experiences of the obviously very strong riding slave are not the best. But ... the new owner must have had to pay a high price to acquire such a magnificent specimen. Of course he has expectations and is curious to see whether there are other talents hidden within him. The blowjob was obviously not bad and met with his approval. The rider can now get back into the saddle and ride home in a relaxed manner.

A nimble and persistent tongue is of course also very much appreciated by the ladies of the house. But I am sure that this will also be more fun for the new slave than sucking his master's male organ. We will find out ...

Young people can of course often not be particularly pleasant for a slave. They are often curious, want to test limits and can be ruthless, even brutal. They often like crude jokes in which slaves are the focus. They often outdo each other in creativity.

The new slave will often be used as a riding slave in this family, so that he can get from one place to another quickly and comfortably. The riding whip and spurs will certainly play an important role here too... because young people like to be active and want to know how much strength and energy they can get out of their two-legged horse.

Great continuation, Frederik!

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#9 2024-12-29 00:59:20

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Re: The mountain training

Frederik

Great story!

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#10 2025-01-01 17:41:03

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Re: The mountain training

Part 3

Then the time had come. The rider climbed back into the shoulder saddle with a swing, grabbed the reins and after the riding boots were safely in the stirrups, he gave his slave a quick kick with the spurs "Come on, let's go!" and his servant started moving again. Although this short "break" was certainly not a complete relief for him, he somehow moved a little more dynamically than before. So rider and slave had obviously both benefited from this pleasant break.

What was surprising, but was also mentioned with enthusiasm by the slave trader before the purchase, was that this fellow, this pure slave creature, had not developed any resistance or aggression. The rider had not even had to restrain him with his hands. Neither his hard-hitting riding whip nor the energetic use of the spurs had aroused resistance in him. Quite the opposite, because despite the fact that he had been treated quite roughly, his hands were firmly on his master's thighs and thus additionally stabilized his seat in the saddle. This was evidence of the perfect training of this slave, this gentle powerhouse.

Even when he had the male organ between his lips and the warm urine flowed freely, and he had to blow afterwards until he ejaculated - which he did quite well - he immediately followed every command, even doing his best to please his master. So it was really not necessary to be considerate or to have other inhibitions when dealing with him. With him, everyone could give free rein to their "dark feelings" and really let off steam.

The rider had to smile. The slave still had a lot to do, because he knew his "ladies" and the four young people very well. They would keep him busy and push him to his limits. The "ladies" in particular could be real furies if they were in the saddle in the right mood or had harnessed the slave to a one-axle vehicle, perhaps a sulky. Then they could be excessive.

But first he was sitting in the saddle himself and enjoyed hearing the sound of the leather whip on sweaty skin. This was also slowly becoming necessary, because now his new riding slave was slowing down a little in the meantime, but then he reacted immediately, even powerful kicks with the spurs hit his flanks, had a positive effect and he ran faster again.
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